1st - The free shipping expired on the 23rd, which meant it worked for only about an hour (Maybe, if even that.), and the way you built it into the post was questionable since it was allowed to stick around in the title. (Now removed.)
2nd - The title implies that all the categories are 40% off for both sexes, and is in conflict with the description as a result, and the title take precedence for importance.
3rd - You don't even mention the second sale in the title, which is a no-no. If you can't fit it in the title and make it clear, then you need to give it its own post.
A three of these issues combined (Mainly the first two.) are the reason this was turned contest off.